Turn the light off.
You are ruining my darkness.
Little flowers illuminate your path.
See if I follow.
Fog, why are you holding the shimmer?
Little light you aren't mine.
I don't think.
Maybe?
Or do you belong to the tree?
It is those damn bees.
Haven't written any poetry in a while. John Chapman, over at A Vested Interest, kicked off his first blog hop. I know how sad it is to see a blog hop fall apart. So thought I would throw some support that way.
Gotta throw some good karma out there after yesterdays post. :)
Now you've got me thinking. That last line creates a very interesting twist in the tail.
ReplyDeleteI LOVED that last line! I'm posting my entry on Thursday, it's been fun to see what people come up with :)
ReplyDeleteOoo, poetry. I like it ^_^
ReplyDeleteInteresting!
ReplyDeleteVery cool! I'm not great with poetry at all, but I find your short sentences really effective. :)
ReplyDeleteI love how the little flowers illuminate the path, as opposed to the lightbulb. Beautiful words :)
ReplyDeleteIt is those damn bees is a great closing line. Glad someone chose poetry. Nice work :)
ReplyDeleteAh, those bees. They'll get you every time :)
ReplyDeleteBees! Great closing line - new follower.
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